Karla: Has rainbow coloured hair. When she awoke, she was wearing a wedding dress. Also has a gun hidden in her bra. Is actually an assasin, who pretended to fall in love with the nations prince. Then, on the wedding day, she shot an killed the prince and his gathered family. His blood splattered on her dress.
She eventually has a crush on Kreh.
He ages very quickly and suddenly.
Neither her, nor Drake remember being related.
Kreh: Golden eyes, golden hair and has a tail. Carries a sword made of shining silver. He's gay. He was once the tyrant king of a world. However, because of his habit of raping his male servants and just being kind of a spoiled brat. He wasn't exactly liked. He has a note saying he's been in Elixe before.
Often forgets peoples names, except steve's. ( likes him)
The story begins in Elixe, the prison of Lemuria where people are sent for a time if they misbehave, alas because of technological differences between Lemuria and earth as most know consequences are different because firstly people can live forever and be brought back to life and most crime is reedemable through its lack of perminance.
As a result while Lucia is a serial killer, she is not bound forever in the world of prison only because her crimes can be ressurected and she has already recieved part of the consequence when she was raped doing what she does. As if it were permanent then she would meet equal justice, her issue is with the bloodwand attached to her, which she must learn to cope with.
In similar manners, Kreh's own crimes against his people are redeemed in the ability to remove the memory within a context which does not provide potential of recurrence, unlike examples of drug use where it is better to know what happened rather then not at all, this means that while Kreh is an ass, his actions are not as effective as they are in the world of yesterday.
Karla while not as bad in that the crime is assasination is an act she did by payment and thus is not appropriate, as she has failed to see moral justice. which could have better been dealt with in a situation where the crimes of the king could have been dealt with justly rather then shooting the entire family at the wedding. These people were brought back to life and put to trial seperately.
Alas, their crimes are yet redeemed in alternative of perfection which is why it is the case that their world has placed them in the virtual reality that is Elixe and taken their memories so that they may redeem themselves somehow in a harsh environment similar to the story that is the eclian. As it should be noted that the eclians own punishment, that with the pirates was based off this above story.
While Drake did not do anything wrong the people fear his power and hope to attain certainty he will behave appropriately, as a result he was put into Elixe, with his mother ( unknown to him or her ) to help teach him and see whether he will lean more or less towards the more problematic in his own behavior, while here to ensure he can also understand the consequence of his actions.
These characters were initially invented by myself at 17 and never furthered beyond a single writing which is now lost, but did not contain much more then what is written here. Only similarities recalled from the eclian.
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